Chocolate Countries

ok, i thought i will write a nicer and more...helpful critique then the one i saw. Their hands are defiantly off, it doesn't seem like bone structure was closely followed here, but that can be fixed with photos and such and by looking at your own hands. Then faces need to be more proportioned and ears should be placed on the girl in the front and person in the back for sure. you should try drawing noses and work on your anatomy. The girl's right (our right) breast and shoulder is alot larger than the left. Lighting hasn't been taken into account at all from what i see, you just placed it randomly. You also need to work on how clothing folds. the hair looks way too rushed, as does the picture as a whole to me.

this isen't the worst i have ever seen before, but i do think more effort and time should have been spent on it. i know im not one to talk about putting time into things, but this just looks far too hastily done. if you say "i failed miserably, don't i?" then fix it. if you know you did badly on it, then fix it to where you are happy about it.

hope this managed to help you in some way.